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اسرحلك قصّة من الحقيقة اقرأها واستمتع بها واستمتع بالتعليقات أيضا

I think the writer made a zoom to that character& he is v. good when discriping to us how was that all began,from the first moment that he fall in love ,that is life ,but the most beatiful thing in it that u love &loved by,from all of my heart i wish u all luck & don't stop at {ESRA7LAK} but plz continue as well ok wish u luck & love ;) urs 4 ever moni

Dear writer,

i just want to congratulate you for this nice story that you wrote ....it was really so nice ...honestly i want to express my feeling while reading this story ....actually i didn't want it to finish because i had the feeling that it will have an unhappy end as all stories do....

The story started with explaining the nature of the hero as he was very wise & he was thinking too much about the people around him ,but finally he discovered that it was useless because the world is so wide & there is no time for thinking as life is moving so fast & i think he was right............

What is nice in this story that it is carrying very high feelings as it raises you to a level you don't reach ...but you will be so happy to be there....& share this deep feelings that it is not dependent upon anything except the inner feeling of comfort which i think most of us are missing these days......you know why ? because he already knew that girl before ,but he didn't discover her untill she gave him spontaneously without thinking what he feels that he is missing ...she saved him from all his silence ,she gave him hope in life & chance to fly away like a bird who was tired from his cage & finally he found his way to freedom..........

The writer used very strong & deep feelings which reaches us through the words .....it was really marvellous & moving story .......

,But in my opinion you didn't clearly illustrate the aim of the story which become unknown specially after the end which left you saying ...what is this?what happened?

it was really strange ........your end was full of fear from what is coming ......as you are so happy & afraid to loose this happiness..........,but why? i think that the end of this story should be full of hope & wishes or anything just to show us what is going to happen ......so it is better to consider it asrahlak part one & we will be waiting for part two...........

Finally i want to thank you for such a nice story & we will be waiting for part two........

what you see here is an entertainment of your eyes ears brain all together so when you finish you should always come again p.s : Nice mouse keep it on....!!

Hi Mr. mohammed,,, i just want to say that it was avery good chance to me reading this story and i felt that its very truly one and really touched me coz its not happening all the days in our society this honest fillings we are missing it this days hope that it will be good starting and we are waiting for the next story a.s.a.p for the scound time i want to thank u again for sharing us with u in this kind fillings and good luck

Dear mohamed: we wanna to say that is a veygood steps 4 u. This is very nice language and wonderful story. we enjoy with it and we hope to write another story,we will wait. we suggest to try write in "3Ammeya " it will be nice . Good Luck. Bon

I think it was a good trial from you ti create a short story analysing a particular personality, but you couldn't enter deep enough to that personality.Also each story should contain certain complication and a solution which you didn't enclose in your trial.

الى كاتب اسرحلك القصه رائعه و الكلمات بسيطه و رقيقه و صادقه و عشان كلنا نفهم اسرحلك و نحسها معاك و نسأل زى ماحنا عايزين انا عايزه اقترح عليك انه تعمل دعوه لكل اللى قرأ اسرحلك انهم يدخلوا على السايت فى معاد تحدده انت ونشترك كلنا معاك فى حوار حول اسرحك و اسرحلك

الى كاتب القصة .. لا اعرف بما اعبر عما بداخلى من شكر لك فانت عبرت بكلمات بسيطة عما كان بينى و بين انسان ..فيما قد مضى ..وصفت حبا ليس بحب و صداقة ليست بصداقة .. شيئا نحسه اسمى من كل شئ و هو اقوى من سيطرتنا عليه .. جاءت على لحظات كنت انعت شعورى نحوه ب"اللعين"لانى لم اكن افهم سببا لتعلقى به و احتياجى الدائم له و رغبتى فى ان اظل بقربه للابد .. لكن دون حب ..دون كلمات الغرام و القصائد .. دون الاقتراب و المحاولات الدائمة للمس اليد حبا اطهر من ان يسمى حب ..اهنئك الف مرة ان كنت قد كتبت هذه القصة دون ان تمر بتجربة تجعلك تكتبها .. اما ان كنت قد مررت بهذه التجربة فاليك عزائى .. فلقد جاءت عليك لحظة تعذبت فيها لانك جعلت قلبك فريسة لعقلك ..و تركت المنطق يخلع على صدق مشاعرك .. المزيد من المسميات الكاذبة .. فلقد احببت بطلة هذه القصة فعلا لكنه العقل اللعين الذى يفسد كل شئ